# Interactive story game

**URL:** https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851
**Category:** Forum Games
**Created:** [August 28, 2021, 9:20am UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851 "2021-08-28T09:20:51Z")
**Posts on this page:** 20
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### Author: ![Deathpacitoast](https://thrivecommunity-cdn.b-cdn.net/user_avatar/community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/deathpacitoast/32/6871_2.png) [@Deathpacitoast](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/u/Deathpacitoast)
#### Post date: [August 28, 2021, 9:20am UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/1 "2021-08-28T09:20:51Z")

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Here’s your quick run down of how to play this:

I give you a handful of choices and set a poll for these choices. the most voted choice is picked and the story follows that path. Pretty simple.  
_You can propose an alternative choice but it will only be accepted if I deem it “in character” and if enough people second your choice_

Lets get on with character creation: this will dictate the kind of choices the character can make during the campaign. it comes down to 4 major character traits:

- Strength
- Dexterity
- Intelligence
- Psyche

these 4 traits will effect the choices that can be made as well as alter how easily certain checks/locks are bypassed. It may sound complicated and or intimidating but ignore it. just pick whatever you want/think sounds cool and deal with the consequences of your decisions later during the campaign:

here are the personalities you can choose from:

* * *

> **Average Joe**
>
> Very balanced, Not particularly bad at anything, but also not particularly good at anything.
> 
> STR +++  
> DEX +++  
> INT +++  
> PSY +++

* * *

> **Physical**
>
> Very physical. As dumb as they get, but gets things done.
> 
> STR +++++  
> DEX ++++  
> INT +  
> PSY ++

* * *

> **Sensitive**
>
> Very psychological. Knows how people work and think, but is also a bit unstable.
> 
> STR ++++  
> DEX ++  
> INT +  
> PSY +++++

* * *

> **Intelligent**
>
> Very intelligent. great at piecing together things, but not good with people.
> 
> STR ++  
> DEX ++++  
> INT ++++++  
> PSY +

_Poll ([view on site](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/1))_

you should have about 1 day (ish, may be less because I might close the poll before the countdown completes) to complete the poll. Pick wisely because after a character type is chosen we’re stuck with them for the rest of the game.

Once we have a character to use I’ll just put them in the world and we can begin.  
This is one of those games where you can just hop in or stop playing whenever.  
I don’t want to make you feel obligated/pressure you into having to write a response while we all wait or anything like that.  
👍

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### Author: ![Evolution4Weak](https://thrivecommunity-cdn.b-cdn.net/user_avatar/community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/evolution4weak/32/11005_2.png) [@Evolution4Weak](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/u/Evolution4Weak)
#### Post date: [August 28, 2021, 8:07pm UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/2 "2021-08-28T20:07:40Z")

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This looks to be pretty unique

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### Author: ![Deathpacitoast](https://thrivecommunity-cdn.b-cdn.net/user_avatar/community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/deathpacitoast/32/6871_2.png) [@Deathpacitoast](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/u/Deathpacitoast)
#### Post date: [August 29, 2021, 2:27am UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/3 "2021-08-29T02:27:05Z")

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OK, looks like we’re playing with the “intelligent” character archetype. Lets begin:  
(also if you want to be reminded every time this game updates i’d advise setting this game to “watching” if it isn’t already  
 ![image](https://thrivecommunity-uploads.b-cdn.net/original/2X/d/db0b457b5ef6c99838c8dfe0fb63ac48c7796b2a.png)

* * *

> **Intro**
>
> > THE STEM  
> > The grains of time trickle down your finger tips.  
> > There is no end in sight  
> > The choice has already been made. and _You_ did not make it.  
> > You are falling deeper into silence.  
> > Deeper. . . and higher and wider.  
> > Forever and ever.
> 
> Perpetual silence sounds nice.
> 
> > THE STEM  
> > Yes is does. . .  
> > You want to fall further and sink deeper inside it’s core.  
> > Free from the voices, away from their all seeing eyes.
> 
> Their voices? Their eyes?
> 
> > THE STEM  
> > This train of thought is dangerous, further exploration of this will lead to a displeasing result.  
> > Fall back deeper into the silence. . .  
> > Back into the perpetual silence.
> 
> Yes. . . Sweet oblivion. . .
> 
> > THE SENSORIUM  
> > The realization creeps up at you.  
> > Attached to your fingers is a mass of putrid flesh.  
> > It sags behind your fingers in a great wave of inertia.  
> > And with the awareness of the flesh sac comes an immense pain.
> 
> Th-what. . . where is this place?
> 
> > THE STEM  
> > The threshold has been passed. . .  
> > You can never go back now.
> 
> What is that. . . thing?
> 
> > THE STEM  
> > You wouldn’t want to find out.  
> > You’re another one of those hairless ape things. . .
> 
> A what?
> 
> > THE STEM  
> > A bipedal hairless ape.  
> > Oh there are billions of them.  
> > They’re all on this giant ball of moist dirt.
> 
> Is the ball bouncy?
> 
> > THE STEM  
> > No, it is not bouncy. . .
> 
> Are there really billions of them?
> 
> > THE STEM  
> > Yes. Billions, and all of them are duking it out on the dirt ball.
> 
> How big is the ball?
> 
> > THE STEM  
> > Unbelievably big
> 
> I’m tired of hearing about these weird naked apes. . . Please, I want to leave. I want to go back. . .
> 
> > THE STEM  
> > You already have.  
> > And you can never return. . .
> 
> > **Awakening**
> >
> > > THE CHRONICLER  
> > > You feel your eyelids pry open and the photons of light peeking through the the green canopy sear at your eyeballs.  
> > > Your head feels like its about to burst, and you do not remember _where_ you are or even _who_ you are.  
> > > It feels as though you’ve just woken up from the worst hangover anyone in history has ever dealt with.  
> > > And all your clothes (with the exception of some greasy stained underwear and your left sock) are gone.  
> > > you’re in the middle of nowhere in a forest.
> > 
> > > THE AWARE  
> > > Just a few meters away, you’re able to locate your right sock which somehow got itself stuck atop a tree branch.  
> > > You’re also able to find footprints leading up to the spot you collapsed.
> > 
> > > THE MIND  
> > > They are presumably _your_ footprints. . .
> > 
> > > THE WRATH  
> > > PROVE THAT DISEMBODIED DREAM VOICE WRONG  
> > > YOU ARE NOT A MONKEY!
> > 
> > * * *
> > 
> > Health points: + +  
> > Moral points: +
> > 
> > > Inventory:  
> > > -Stained underwear  
> > > -Left sock
> > 
> > > Character traits:  
> > > Base stats:  
> > > STR: ++  
> > > DEX: ++++  
> > > INT: +++++  
> > > PSY: +

_Poll ([view on site](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/3))_

The poll will be done in 24ish hours and may be less depending on whether or not i decide to close the poll early because I can’t be bothered waiting.

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### Author: ![Evolution4Weak](https://thrivecommunity-cdn.b-cdn.net/user_avatar/community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/evolution4weak/32/11005_2.png) [@Evolution4Weak](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/u/Evolution4Weak)
#### Post date: [August 29, 2021, 3:34am UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/4 "2021-08-29T03:34:59Z")

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The format reminds of Disco Elysium with the talking skills and starting with a hangover

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### Author: ![Deathpacitoast](https://thrivecommunity-cdn.b-cdn.net/user_avatar/community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/deathpacitoast/32/6871_2.png) [@Deathpacitoast](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/u/Deathpacitoast)
#### Post date: [August 29, 2021, 3:44am UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/5 "2021-08-29T03:44:32Z")

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You’re spot on regarding the inspiration for the format.  
I did have to simplify a few mechanics for the sake of making it easier to manage and converting it into a forum game so don’t expect a full ensemble of talking skills.

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### Author: ![Deathpacitoast](https://thrivecommunity-cdn.b-cdn.net/user_avatar/community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/deathpacitoast/32/6871_2.png) [@Deathpacitoast](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/u/Deathpacitoast)
#### Post date: [August 29, 2021, 11:53pm UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/6 "2021-08-29T23:53:02Z")

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Redoing the poll since we got a 3 way split:

_Poll ([view on site](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/6))_

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### Author: ![Deathpacitoast](https://thrivecommunity-cdn.b-cdn.net/user_avatar/community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/deathpacitoast/32/6871_2.png) [@Deathpacitoast](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/u/Deathpacitoast)
#### Post date: [August 30, 2021, 7:39am UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/7 "2021-08-30T07:39:41Z")

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> **Story**
>
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > You climb up the tree  
> > and reach out for the sock. . .  
> > Success! (2, 4, +4 =10)  
> > You wrap your hand around the sock and pull it off the branch!  
> > You put the sock on.  
> > All is well.  
> > +1 heal moral
> 
> > THE WRATH  
> > You liked that didn’t you? You. . .You have integrity. . .  
> > Look at how sophisticated you are with your 2 socks and stained underwear.
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > You do not know why, but you instinctively begin clicking your tongue and finger-gunning.
> 
> > THE TECHNICIAN  
> > You _needed_ that sock. . .  
> > That sock _needed_ you.
> > 
> > > Obtained Neat Freak trait.
> 
> > THE WRATH  
> > That disembodied voice was right. . . You ARE a naked _ape._
> 
> > THE TECHNICIAN  
> > You don’t know why but it just feels right.  
> > maybe you ARE a naked ape
> > 
> > > Obtained Naked Ape trait
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > With your complete set of socks. You begin to slowly trace the footprints back. . . slowly you walk following the path you left behind.  
> > In the distance you begin to see it. What looks like the edge of the forest as well as some kind of reflective material.
> 
> > The AWARE  
> > It is a 4 wheeled motor vehicle. It has crashed into a tree. It looks like it was fairly recent.
> 
> > THE MIND  
> > Was. . . this our motor vehicle?
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > You begin to investigate the crashed motor vehicle.  
> > Unfortunately the vehicle is in an incredibly awkward position that would make opening it difficult.  
> > The trail it left behind is still visible.
> 
> * * *
> 
> Health points + +  
> Moral points +
> 
> > Inventory  
> > -stained underwear  
> > -left and right sock
> 
> > Character traits  
> > Base stats:  
> > STR: ++  
> > DEX: ++++  
> > INT: +++++  
> > PSY: +
> > 
> > > Neat freak
> > 
> > > Naked ape

_Poll ([view on site](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/7))_

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### Author: ![Deathpacitoast](https://thrivecommunity-cdn.b-cdn.net/user_avatar/community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/deathpacitoast/32/6871_2.png) [@Deathpacitoast](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/u/Deathpacitoast)
#### Post date: [August 30, 2021, 10:44pm UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/8 "2021-08-30T22:44:55Z")

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> **Story**
>
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > You feel an urge to apologize to the tree that you crashed into.  
> > your prostrate yourself beneath the tree and begin begging for it’s forgiveness yet are met with silence.  
> > You are a brutal killer.  
> > A monster.  
> > In a desperate panic to hide the evidence that you were ever involved you begin to clean up the crime scene.  
> > You get caught up in the enjoyable act and spend alot of time cleaning up the wreckage.  
> > It feels right, Cleaning up messes feels right.  
> > Amongst the debris you discover a strange small object.
> 
> > THE AWARE  
> > The object is some kind of machinery. it looks like it’s now defunct.
> 
> > THE MIND  
> > But if you were to somehow able to discover more about this strange contraption. . . or maybe even salvage or sell it later! To whom though. . .
> 
> > THE MIND  
> > NO YOU FOOL!  
> > How dare you even propose to sell or salvage this!  
> > Make a statement about society using this _thing_!  
> > You feel it in your blood do you not?  
> > A burning passion?  
> > Unleash the inner artist~!
> 
> * * *
> 
> Health points + +  
> Moral points +
> 
> > Inventory  
> > -stained underwear  
> > -left and right sock  
> > -Weird metal object
> 
> > Character traits  
> > Base stats:  
> > STR: ++  
> > DEX: ++++  
> > INT: +++++  
> > PSY: +
> > 
> > > Neat freak
> > 
> > > Naked ape

_Poll ([view on site](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/8))_

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### Author: ![Evolution4Weak](https://thrivecommunity-cdn.b-cdn.net/user_avatar/community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/evolution4weak/32/11005_2.png) [@Evolution4Weak](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/u/Evolution4Weak)
#### Post date: [August 31, 2021, 1:00am UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/9 "2021-08-31T01:00:03Z")

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What do our traits do?

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#### Post date: [August 31, 2021, 1:18am UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/10 "2021-08-31T01:18:29Z")

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Some traits are peripheral and alter your base stat by increasing specific stats and or decreasing other specific stats,  
others will change the choices the character can make,  
and some are situational and can effect the success-rate of certain checks. eg the “naked ape” trait is beneficial for certain physical checks (it gives a +1 to the strength checks increasing the probability of success) and is detrimental for certain intelligent/psyche checks. What situations they effect are going to be in play will be entirely arbitrary and dictated by me though.

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#### Post date: [September 1, 2021, 8:52am UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/11 "2021-09-01T08:52:31Z")

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> **Story**
>
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > It’s time. . .  
> > You hear the voices of your distant ancestors cheering you on  
> > You hear their screams!  
> > You hear their shouts!
> 
> > THE WRATH  
> > UNLEASH THE APE!  
> > OOooOAAhAAhA!!
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > Using the your naked ape powers you grab a hold of it and. . .  
> > Failure. . .(5,2 +2, +1 (naked ape trait) = 10)  
> > As you lift up the vehicle you become aware of just how heavy it really is. . .  
> > Uh oh.  
> > it slams down on your foot!  
> > The pain is immense,  
> > In a fit of pure unadulterated monkey rage you slam your other foot into the vehicle.  
> > But you aim poorly and only slam your toe into it  
> > -1 health points.
> 
> > THE MIND  
> > HA, HA, HA.
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > You then try to salvage the machine thing . . .  
> > ABSOLUTE Failure. . . (1, 1, +4 = 6)  
> > Maybe you weren’t as dexterous with your hands as you thought. . .  
> > The contraption breaks apart and you have no clue how to put it back together or what each part does.
> 
> > THE MIND  
> > Oh I know! that’s a nail!
> 
> > THE AWARE  
> > There are metal nails in the machine
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > An astute observation that only someone as smart as yourself could’ve made.  
> > You grab the nail and pat yourself on the back.  
> > +1 moral points  
> > With your new trusty nail you begin to walk along the tire tracks you left behind.  
> > The cool breeze brushes up against your body and it occurs to you that you should maybe find some clothes.  
> > You’ve already come this far though. . .
> 
> > THE MIND  
> > Do you see that my friend?  
> > Those mushy rotten leaves. . .  
> > That damp soggy stick. . .  
> > This is the perfect place to make a fashion statement!
> 
> * * *
> 
> Health points + /  
> Moral points +
> 
> > Inventory  
> > -stained underwear  
> > -left and right sock  
> > -a rusty nail
> 
> > Character traits  
> > Base stats:  
> > STR: ++  
> > DEX: ++++  
> > INT: +++++  
> > PSY: +
> > 
> > > Neat freak
> > 
> > > Naked ape

_Poll ([view on site](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/11))_

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### Author: ![Deathpacitoast](https://thrivecommunity-cdn.b-cdn.net/user_avatar/community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/deathpacitoast/32/6871_2.png) [@Deathpacitoast](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/u/Deathpacitoast)
#### Post date: [September 2, 2021, 1:08am UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/12 "2021-09-02T01:08:00Z")

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> **Story**
>
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > You roll around in the rotting leaves  
> > They don’t really stick on, so you opt for the next best thing and begin stuffing your underwear and socks with soggy leaves.  
> > you don’t know where to put the stick though . . . so you just drop it and let it go.  
> > You begin following the trail and are very soon you find a strange wall. As you get closer you hear some voices mumble in the distance
> 
> > VOICE 1  
> > (Oh god he’s back. . .)
> 
> > VOICE 2  
> > (What do we do?)
> 
> > VOICE 1  
> > (Just. . . let me handle this. . .)
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > You feel the eyes and ears of the dozen’s of people behind that tall wall monitoring your every movement and sound.
> 
> > THE SOUL  
> > Do you feel that my friend?  
> > That is called “the spotlight.”  
> > It was built for us!  
> > Why stand in when you could’ve stood out instead!
> 
> > VOICE 1  
> > HEY! What the hell do you want? Why are you back here?
> 
> > VOICE 2  
> > (Why are his clothes stuffed with leaves. . .)
> 
> > THE WRATH  
> > HE DARE QUESTIONS OUR AUTHORITY  
> > PUT HIM IN HIS PLACE
> 
> > THE AWARE  
> > They are both holding what appears to be some kind of ranged weapon. a bow of some kind.
> 
> > THE MIND  
> > Maybe we shouldn’t do those things and try to clear up the situation before anything gets out of hand. . .
> 
> * * *
> 
> Health points + /  
> Moral points +
> 
> > Inventory  
> > -stained underwear  
> > -left and right sock  
> > -a rusty nail
> 
> > Character traits  
> > Base stats:  
> > STR: ++  
> > DEX: ++++  
> > INT: +++++  
> > PSY: +
> > 
> > > Neat freak
> > 
> > > Naked ape

_Poll ([view on site](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/12))_

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#### Post date: [September 2, 2021, 10:11pm UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/13 "2021-09-02T22:11:33Z")

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> **Story**
>
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > You try to clear up the situation as best as you can with your people skills
> 
> > Voice 1  
> > HEY! What the hell do you want? Why are you back here?
> 
> -uh, i don’t know. . .
> 
> > VOICE 2  
> > (What?)
> 
> > VOICE 1  
> > (he say’s he doesn’t know)
> 
> > VOICE 2  
> > (What do we do?)
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > Before they have an opportunity to come to an agreement on what to do you tell them the rest of the story
> 
> -. . . and so now i’m here.
> 
> > VOICE 1  
> > woah woah- slow down there buddy.  
> > I’m sorry but we can’t help you.  
> > especially after what you did last night.
> 
> -last night?
> 
> > VOICE 2  
> > (he doesn’t remember does he?)
> 
> > VOICE 1  
> > You. . . (you tell him. . .)
> 
> > VOICE 2  
> > uh. . . last night you began harassing civilians. . .  
> > you began calling yourself “the Ape” and screaming and spitting at people. . .  
> > When the situation got too intense and the militia were called in, you stole a car and drove off, crashing into numerous things on the way out. . .
> 
> -oh.
> 
> > THE MIND  
> > This isn’t the time to feel guilty over the past. you’re a changed man.
> 
> > THE WRATH  
> > you’re a monkey.
> 
> > THE MIND  
> > use this opportunity to learn as much as you can!
> 
> -so, where are we?
> 
> > VOICE 1  
> > (he’s asking where we are)
> 
> > VOICE 2  
> > . . .This is the Avruuston. . . it’s a human settlement within the jurisdiction of the P.U.E.C.  
> > To the south of here is the dead frontier.  
> > you wont find anything there but a desert and a bunch of outlaws,  
> > north of here is the Deglaonian lake.  
> > if you go far enough east or west you’lll eventually reach the sea and some other human settlements.
> 
> -when are we. . .
> 
> > VOICE 1  
> > The age of res publica!
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > The other man begins laughing hysterically.
> 
> > THE MIND  
> > how useful. . .
> 
> > VOICE 2  
> > (hey man. . .why don’t we just let the poor guy in, what harm is he gonna be?)
> 
> > VOICE 1  
> > (you want to bring “the ape” inside?)
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > Their words sting.
> 
> > THE SOUL  
> > My friend!  
> > now is the perfect time to unleash the beast!
> 
> * * *
> 
> Health points + /  
> Moral points +
> 
> > Inventory  
> > -stained underwear  
> > -left and right sock  
> > -a rusty nail
> 
> > Character traits  
> > Base stats:  
> > STR: ++  
> > DEX: ++++  
> > INT: +++++  
> > PSY: +
> > 
> > > Neat freak
> > 
> > > Naked ape

_Poll ([view on site](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/13))_

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### Author: ![Deathpacitoast](https://thrivecommunity-cdn.b-cdn.net/user_avatar/community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/deathpacitoast/32/6871_2.png) [@Deathpacitoast](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/u/Deathpacitoast)
#### Post date: [September 4, 2021, 1:12am UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/14 "2021-09-04T01:12:49Z")

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> **Story**
>
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > This is it. . . You feel your blood pumping and the adrenaline kicking in. It’s time to show them who the real king of this world is.
> 
> -Do you boys know who the king of this world is?
> 
> > Voice 2  
> > What?
> 
> -It is I!
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > You spontaneously begin breakdancing to the beat of your pumping heart  
> > You’re reaching levels of dance mania you never thought was possible!  
> > Badum-badum-Badum-badum-Badum-badum  
> > You have inexplicably altered the lives of the people here to witness this grand event.  
> > You are the shaper of this world. and it is through dance that you will cleanse this world of its sins!
> 
> > Voice 1  
> > Hey, Someone help him! I think he’s having a seizure!
> 
> > THE SOUL  
> > YES, YES, YES
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > The music of your soul drowns out that slightly concerning comment.  
> > Your moves cannot be halted by the onslaught of time.  
> > Or the opinions of the sheep  
> > You are eternal!  
> > You are. . . The dance man
> 
> > Voice 2  
> > Leave him be!  
> > who cares if he dies!
> 
> > Voice 1  
> > But. . .
> 
> > THE SOUL  
> > They love you!  
> > They love your sick moves!
> 
> > Booming voice  
> > HALT!
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > suddenly a new individual appears atop the wall. Their booming voice silences the concerned mumbling of the sentinels.
> 
> > THE SOUL  
> > BUT NOT THE BEAT OF YOUR HEART.  
> > DANCE ON!
> 
> > Booming voice  
> > Not going to listen aye?
> 
> > THE AWARE  
> > In the corner of your eye you see him grab a bow and arrow from one of the sentinels
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > THWAK!  
> > His bow releases a warning shot a few centimeters away from your body.  
> > You stop dead in your tracks
> 
> > THE SOUL  
> > NO YOU FOOL!  
> > DANCE ON!  
> > DESTROY THE WHEEL!
> 
> -No! please don’t kill me! I’m sorry. . .!
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > You drop down to your knees and begin shaking. . .what is this feeling. . .  
> > You feel as though you’ve met this man before.
> 
> > Booming voice  
> > This semi naked fool was the problem you were dealing with?  
> > . . .  
> > Just throw him in with the slaves
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > The man spits on the ground.  
> > guards of some kind barge through the door of the wall pin you down and begin dragging you inside
> 
> > THE MIND  
> > Slavery? Where are we?  
> > Oh god the reality of being an amnesiac has only settled in.  
> > What have you been doing all this time?
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > you feel your mind _fall_ out of your body
> 
> * * *
> 
> * * *
> 
> > THE STEM  
> > Welcome back. . .
> 
> -oh no. . .
> 
> > THE STEM  
> > Lets sink back into the darkness and emptiness. . .
> 
> -No! I can’t!. . I. . .
> 
> * * *
> 
> Health points + /  
> Moral points +
> 
> > Inventory  
> > -stained underwear  
> > -left and right sock  
> > -a rusty nail
> 
> > Character traits  
> > Base stats:  
> > STR: ++  
> > DEX: ++++  
> > INT: +++++  
> > PSY: +
> > 
> > > Neat freak
> > 
> > > Naked ape

_Poll ([view on site](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/14))_

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### Author: ![Nigel](https://thrivecommunity-cdn.b-cdn.net/user_avatar/community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/nigel/32/6997_2.png) [@Nigel](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/u/Nigel)
#### Post date: [September 4, 2021, 12:27pm UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/15 "2021-09-04T12:27:52Z")

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m o n k e  
CHAR LIMIT \>:(

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### Author: ![Deathpacitoast](https://thrivecommunity-cdn.b-cdn.net/user_avatar/community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/deathpacitoast/32/6871_2.png) [@Deathpacitoast](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/u/Deathpacitoast)
#### Post date: [September 5, 2021, 12:02am UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/16 "2021-09-05T00:02:41Z")

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looks like a tie: here’s a redo with the top 2 options.

_Poll ([view on site](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/16))_

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### Author: ![Deathpacitoast](https://thrivecommunity-cdn.b-cdn.net/user_avatar/community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/deathpacitoast/32/6871_2.png) [@Deathpacitoast](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/u/Deathpacitoast)
#### Post date: [September 6, 2021, 1:28am UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/17 "2021-09-06T01:28:31Z")

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> **Story**
>
> -I have to go back! . . I don’t even know know who i am or where i am.
> 
> > THE STEM  
> > And is that a bad thing?  
> > It’s a clean slate and new chance.  
> > Maybe you’re better off staying this way then finding out who and where you are before this…
> 
> > THE SENSORIUM  
> > . . .
> 
> -Shutup!
> 
> > THE STEM  
> > aren’t you a sly little thing? A mystery solver. . . maybe even a detective! You’re like a little spider slowly deliberately designing its intricate web to ensnare its prey.  
> > Uh oh  
> > The ape awakens.
> 
> * * *
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > The throbbing pain in your head remains as you wake up.  
> > The little nap you had felt nice.  
> > +1 Health point  
> > You have been thrown into a cold dark cave. As your eyes peel open you note that above you staring right down at you is a strangely shaped silhouette.
> 
> > THE SILHOUETTE  
> > it wake?
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > It’s voice sounds fabricated. like it was stitched together from the voices of multiple indivduals. And the voice doesn’t seem to be coming from the creature but within your ears. . .  
> > As your eyes adjust to the darkness it becomes clear that you have no idea what this thing is.
> 
> > THE AWARE  
> > It’s body is radially symmetrical and sits atop 6 strong jointed leg appendages. it’s body is dotted in a line of many compound eyes and atop the body of the creature are 6 secondary spindly limbs that presumably act as arms.
> 
> > THE SOUL  
> > ![image](https://thrivecommunity-uploads.b-cdn.net/original/2X/e/eb7275015321f1c30dbac4b98391e4cbfe31457a.jpeg)
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > It pokes at your unmoving face with one of its 6 arms
> 
> > THE SILHOUETTE  
> > it wake?
> 
> * * *
> 
> Health points + +  
> Moral points +
> 
> > Inventory  
> > -stained underwear  
> > -left and right sock  
> > -a rusty nail
> 
> > Character traits  
> > Base stats:  
> > STR: ++  
> > DEX: ++++  
> > INT: +++++  
> > PSY: +
> > 
> > > Neat freak
> > 
> > > Naked ape

_Poll ([view on site](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/17))_

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### Author: ![Evolution4Weak](https://thrivecommunity-cdn.b-cdn.net/user_avatar/community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/evolution4weak/32/11005_2.png) [@Evolution4Weak](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/u/Evolution4Weak)
#### Post date: [September 6, 2021, 4:54am UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/18 "2021-09-06T04:54:10Z")

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Glad we are trying to be a little sane now

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### Author: ![Deathpacitoast](https://thrivecommunity-cdn.b-cdn.net/user_avatar/community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/deathpacitoast/32/6871_2.png) [@Deathpacitoast](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/u/Deathpacitoast)
#### Post date: [September 6, 2021, 11:57am UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/19 "2021-09-06T11:57:55Z")

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> **Story**
>
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > You lay there on the ground like the sad sack of meat that you are.  
> > you feel your body limpen as you play the part of a dead man.  
> > It taps at your limp body with one of its fat padded legs.
> 
> > THE UNIDENTIFIED CREATURE  
> > Not wake?
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > it crouches and begins to inspect your body more thoroughly.  
> > You feel it’s intense stare as it tugs at your body.
> 
> > THE AWARE  
> > You are not alone with this creature. You’ve only noticed it but there are other figures in the darkness.
> 
> > THE UNIDENTIFIED CREATURE  
> > Not wake?
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > It lowers its body and its eyes meet yours.  
> > you restrain yourself from making any sudden movements with your open eyes.  
> > it makes a dissatisfied noise before crawling off.  
> > It’s departure is short lived though and more of these hexapods begin inspecting your body.  
> > One of these hexapods softly places its foot down on your chest
> 
> > THE ADVENTEROUS UNIDENTIFIED CREATURE  
> > IT WAKE!
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > It screams and jumps back.  
> > The whole area begins to murmur amongst themselves.
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > There is nothing you can do at this point.  
> > You slowly rise up from the cold stone floor and gaze down at the creatures.  
> > They’re all rather small. . .  
> > Their chattering silences.
> 
> > THE SOUL  
> > Look at their eyes. We can’t trust these things. First thing we should do is try to escape wherever we are and. . . Find out what to do from there.
> 
> > THE WRATH  
> > Grab a rock and smash their legs in. Show them that you are the naked ape and you are not to be messed with.
> 
> > THE MIND  
> > We understand them! maybe we should see if they understand us.
> 
> > THE CHRONICLER  
> > Immediately you begin to inspect the room in place.  
> > There is a cold bitterness to the air.  
> > It seems to be devoid of anything of interest.  
> > Just an empty room. A stone floor and stone walls.  
> > There is a door but its probably locked.  
> > there are very small window slits that are allowing moonlight in. . .
> 
> > THE MIND  
> > (wait. . .how long were you knocked out?)
> 
> * * *
> 
> Health points + +  
> Moral points +
> 
> > Inventory  
> > -stained underwear  
> > -left and right sock  
> > -a rusty nail
> 
> > Character traits  
> > Base stats:  
> > STR: ++  
> > DEX: ++++  
> > INT: +++++  
> > PSY: +
> > 
> > > Neat freak
> > 
> > > Naked ape

_Poll ([view on site](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/19))_

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### Author: ![Deathpacitoast](https://thrivecommunity-cdn.b-cdn.net/user_avatar/community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/deathpacitoast/32/6871_2.png) [@Deathpacitoast](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/u/Deathpacitoast)
#### Post date: [September 7, 2021, 8:14am UTC](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/20 "2021-09-07T08:14:33Z")

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looks like another tie:

_Poll ([view on site](https://community.revolutionarygamesstudio.com/t/interactive-story-game/3851/20))_

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