(Space Potato) #1

Help me.

Any advice or tips? Can someone fix this mess?

(Space Potato) #2

(Lord Nerd) #3

I would help but, in all honesty it looks great, maybe try having the tail look a bit smaller than the actual body, so you can see where the tail ends, and the body begins, but besides that it looks great

(Steve) #4

The claws on the feet suggest a lack of webbed feet, so it would make sense if the tail was the same size as the body or bigger since itโ€™s the only form of propulsion in the water. The current design would be very slow. Maybe itโ€™s a transition from amphibian into full land but the current version isnโ€™t that great at amphibious things.

(Ostara) #5

Looks amazing! And what Steve said, maybe give it some more aquatic features to emphasize itโ€™s amphibian nature. Just keep practicing.

(Space Potato) #6

Bad lighting but V2

(๐’ฆ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘” ๐‘œ๐’ป ๐’ฏ๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘”๐“ˆ) #7

The front and back legs look too similar, i think keep the back legs the same and try making the front legs look more like a mouseโ€™s

(Space Potato) #10


(๐’ฆ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘” ๐‘œ๐’ป ๐’ฏ๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘”๐“ˆ) #11

I say that version is pretty good! I overall have no complaints with it.

(Ostara) #12

Stunning :ok_hand:Be cool if you could recreate in game it once Thrive is to that point.

(Space Potato) #14

V4 - Official Name - Snoubakk

(Steve) #15

Better, but maybe extend the upper and lower fin the entire length of the tail and (you donโ€™t need to do this) the tail seems a bit short.

(Space Potato) #16

The fin almost reaches the length of the tail. The top โ€˜finโ€™ is a sail. If I extended the tail, it would be unbalanced because of the sail. The sail would have to be hollow to extend. Keep in mind it has large webbed feet and a somewhat bendable shell.

(Steve) #17

Yah see, this creature doesnโ€™t look that good at swimming itโ€™s webbed feet add manueverability because creatures this big rely on the tail to propel. No it you shorted the height of the top fin and extend the tail then it should be fine.

(Space Potato) #18

Still a sail
Also, itโ€™s mainly amphibious so it doesnโ€™t drown.
I could lengthen the tail and fin, but keep the sail the same size.

(Steve) #19

Or, instead of the plates being solid throughout the back, you have the plates be split in half at the back with the sail in between and have the entire tail dedicated to fins.

(Space Potato) #20

What do you mean, โ€˜split in half?โ€™
Also Iโ€™m gonna make V5

(Steve) #21

Iโ€™m assume the plays are semicircles on the top of the body, Iโ€™m saying split those at the snipe and have the sail go on the spine of the back.

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(แ•แ‰ฟแŠญแ•แˆแˆญแˆจแ‰ฟ แˆจแ‹แ‹ชแ‹•) #22

I made my version of it, sorry I wasnโ€™t able to finish it but I think it gets the job done


(Space Potato) #23

Not quite what I imagined butโ€ฆ


Edit: Is it ok if I use this and edit it?