This is a thread where users can share music they themselves composed/remixed/covered/otherwise had a significant creative input in making. It has been made do to the lack of a thread that completely fulfilled the previously stated purpose.
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Ones spone time, there was facebook page a random algrothm AI exactly created music like this. It sounds like music bit its too fake to be, it is soulness
Hm, thatβs an interesting opinion! Iβm genuinely curious as to what in this music made you feel like itβs unnatural and soulless. Like if itβs something with the melodies and harmonies, the somewhat robotic sound of MuseScoreβs samples, quite repetitive nature of the composition, or something else entirely.
to me, with the instruments it sounds like the creeper world 3 soundtrack! I personally donβt agree with nightvampalihanβs opinion, however I do have my fair bit of constructive criticism.
at around 1:05, thereβs a little part of the song which feels out of place and out of pitch in a way (im not experienced with musical vocabulary so excuse any mistakes I make in that)? Then, at 1:08, past 1:10 to around the end of the song theres the frequent issue of what I described before.
I think the melody is good, though, and the song sounds good in the first minute without any of the aforementioned issue! I think if you change the mentioned (and unmentioned) parts that are the troublemakers, then it will be a very good peice of music
This βissueβ is an intentional artistic choice. What happens at ~1:05 could be described as the song switching into maqam Bayati, which is microtonal (more specifically, it has a half-flat second degree). Itβs understandable that it may sound out of tune and mistaken to you, as thatβs a pretty common experience for people not used to microtones (I myself wasnβt exactly a fan when I was first exposed to them). I guess the modal switch may also be quite jarring, as in the earlier part of the song thereβs basically no foreshadowing of it.
This thread didnβt exist yet (and later on I was preoccupied with other stuff and didnβt really have the motivation to do so (also, back then, to make screen recordings, I relied on the combo of macOSβs built-in screen recorder and Blackhole 16ch, which worked, but was kinda janky and required some time and effort to set up properly (nothing extreme, but it was enough to be discouraging for me). Nowadays, I use OBS, which is MUCH easier to work with). It was only in the past few days, that, as I was going through some of my older projects, I gained enough motivation to go through with sharing this (also OBS made the bar much lower)).
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aah31415
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Yeah. Once I make something that I decide is worthy of sharing, Iβll probably share it. I also encourage other users to share the music they create here (if they wish to do so, ofc, no pressure), so this doesnβt end up becoming just a me-thread.
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aah31415
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To be fair not sure there are many musicians active in the community at the momentβ¦
Yeah, unfortunately this seems to be the caseβ¦ But things always change with time, so, who knows, maybe weβll have an unexpected influx of musical users next week xD
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aah31415
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